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Someone watch over me

                      I feel alone
                    bullyfied, I can't go on
              because this isn't the life I want
            I wanna move on, but I'm stuck in this place
                        I wish I could go
                  But I can't leave,
                      untill
                I feel alright
                    but I'm stuck in the same spot
                  Why can't I go on?
                          Why is this so hard?
                      Why am I all alone?
                        I wanna go on
                  Take me away
                              this cruel place
            is too much for me.
                          I feel like I'm unloved and sad,
                  but why am I here?
                            I wanna go on with my life
              Is there someone watching over me?
                          I feel uncared for
                      I feel this thing going on
                Why oh, why am I feeling this way?
                  Why oh, why? Am I alone?
                          I can't feel,
                      A single thing
                How do I go on with my life
                    Why oh, why?
                            Is someone wathcing over me?
                          I want to
                          get out of this dark cold place!
                      Because, I feel
                            Like I'm gonna cry!
                  Why is there no one wathcing over me?
                          I feel lonely
                Where is my angel?
                        Why am I all alone?
                Why am I here?
                          Where is gradien angel?
                    Let someone watch over me!
                  Where am I now?!
                            Someone watch over me.

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  • Inverted Illusions
    October 25, 2007

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    i will

    if you need someone to watch over you,I will.when I die, i will be your gardein angel, i will protect you, i will do more for you......


  • Marcus.
    June 3, 2007
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    wtf?


  • Disturbed Prodigy
    February 9, 2007

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    you know there is a say, that sometimes when we think there is no one watching there is, that kind of used to scare me as a kid, for like a week i was neverous about taking a piss, lol, this is a strong and honest ppl, to be honest sometimes i feel like no one is there to help me, but then i realize it could be worst, and i think something is keeping that from happen, this is a strong poem, i love it. keep it flowing