In cooling areas
In the calmest blind
Of parched essence
Is my fair love
‘Tis nice like tissue
Across the rose field sky
Serenading in moon-like shine
Of your beautiful eyes
Leaves my feelings to parallel with
The ambiance of durable love
T’is naive then any rose
That blooms across heaven’s garden
I have fainted like any bird that
has fallen against the cheetah coil
Your love kisses within
With lips as calm as
Butter as it runs across
My soul of warm bread
Oh how you run my soul
Like yarn wrapped against
Spoken fingers
Of your wettest words
I dear you to kiss it again
A kiss as fresh as May’s ripe
Oranges
That you may not throw away the
Precious seeds
But leave it there
to prosper a greater love
Author notes
Number two this first kiss
In a list
Please tell me what you think
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"I dear you to kiss it again"
Don't you mean "dare" instead of "dear"?
btw - please read through the rules. You missed 2 things. -
ah love, classic to write a poem about, nice job, thanks for the entry good luck
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thanks
whisper
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Very good.
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Shouldn't I dear you to kiss it again be...I dare you.
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wow..this is amazing..fantastic write..
Peace
~M~
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it could do with a little ajusting here and there but its a stunning read
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Which Option is this? I love this poem. It is so romantic and poetic, it flows so well.
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option 4
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I like this!
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Beautiful and so filled with love and emotion. Excellent write. Great flow and content. Good luck in my contest
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Oh Beautiful love huh? Spoken from a beautiful girl huh? This is cool though not your best.
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this is a beautiful entry. please makes sure to put the option. thanx
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i put the option number thatyou had quoted to be beautiful
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Your love kisses within my soul
With lips as calm as
Butter as it runs across
My soul of warm bread
Spoken fingers
Of your most wettest words
A kiss as fresh as May’s ripe
Oranges
That you may not throw away the
Precious seeds
But leave it there...
This is a beautiful piece of work. I love the flow and you are beautiful too. Keep up the great work and thank you for sharing
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thanks
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