a lightning bolt
sruck in my heart
showing me
what i have done
making me worry
making me weep
i know what i did was wrong
but i promise you im gonna be ok
down and up
left and right
i wish i could go back
and turn back time
i would'nt have done it
i would'nt have needed it
but i promised you im
gonna keep it
that love for him
goes on and on
making me sorry for what
i have done
a lightning bolt
stuck in my heart
showing me
everything i have done wrong
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Very sad poem that I can relate to. I'm sure a lot of people can relate to this in some way. We all make mistakes and then learn from them. The mistake is not who we are. We are the person who learns and moves on. Great poem. It made me think. Keep up the good writes.
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There are parts in this where flow and imagery was great with some rhyme... then other parts with no rhyme stuck out more... and there the flow didn't seem to great! yet still this was an AMAZING poem and it was so powerful and had a great message behind it. I understand what you were saying... plenty of people relate to that. Great metaphors/similes in this poem! Rock on! xoxo meg
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