the ember laying coals
surrounded by burning souls
the infinite occurrence of your blood
your essence hits me like a flood
your lies as sharp as blood soaked needles
your thought as ugly as poisoned beetles
as my thought and inspiration flows down my veins
and my religion is held up by sin ridden chains
darkness falls on my cold lips
and all that is good just rips
your evil is clawing its way out of your soul
once its completely out nothing will be whole
you give up the fight of pure love
and give your pureness to the guy above
staind and broken your soul can't make it
it's just laying there decaying, it has quit
the man raising to help is loved by all who care
the man who is powered by thoughtful prayer
the world has been saved by hopefull thought
because without it the man wouldent have been fought
news of his arrival is in the air
and it's something we dont share
secrets arn't ment to be told
not even if there rusty and old
secrecy breaks us
and news makes us
the more secrets and condemming i hear
the less and less i stand up to cheer
Author notes
if no one gets this, it's pretty much someone is in so much pain that jesus has returned to earth to return glory...which is good! hehe its a happy poem if you really think and look over it well
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A contest entry
- FAMILY FOR BLESSEDANGEL by JoyfulWriter.
450 points, ended February 12, 2007, 14 entries
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Without the rhyming this poem would be very confusing and it wouldn't have much of a flow...you made a great choice in having this piece rhyme because it made the flow so much sweeter...its really deep and really good...Great Job!
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wow, this is an old poem of mine thx for reading
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Pray for me.
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a very good poem, lots of lovely imagery and description, such alot of emotion within. great use of words, i wish you best of luck in the contest
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ty for reading my poem and commenting
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amazing
secrets arn't ment to be told
not even if there rusty and old
that line amazes me.....this is a great poem...the emotion in this poem is soo strong, you should be very prud of this poem....keep writing, keep smiling, keep the peace!!!!...
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ty for reading and commenting my poem
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Very powerful imagery here and such profound emotions shouting to be heard and felt. Such an awesome job here! Thank you for entering my contest! Good luck! Smiles, terry
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im glad you enjoyed my poem and thx for the comment
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