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Sometimes

Sometimes

Sometimes I cry because I am lonely

Somtimes I cry because I'm sad

Somtimees I cry becasue I'm lonley

Sometimes I cry because I'm happy

Sometimes I cry for you

Sometimes I laugh because I'm nervous

Sometimes I laugh becauses I'm excited

Somtimes I laugh because I'm surprised

Sometimes I laugh because I'm worried

Somtimes I laugh because of you

Somtimes I get mad because of injustice

Sometimes i get mad because I was hurt

Sometimes I get mad because of you



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  • poetryality silver member
    May 7, 2007

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    We laugh, we cry, and sometimes we don't even know the reasons why. But then I think that might just come with age, and menopause. Sometimes I wish I were young enough to cry over someone but after being married for such a long time, the tears don't come as easily as they did back then. I laugh a lot now, and there are millions of reasons why but the main reason is... I often crack myself up.

    Thanks for writing this poem, it gave me lots to think on.


    Much Love ♥

    Renee


  • warrior-eagle
    February 8, 2007

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    yeah wht darkchild said is true and i like it as much as i like the other one


  • WinterBliss
    February 8, 2007

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    No

    No i didnt mean to use lonley twice but it just kinda happend and after i saw it it just fit so i left it in.

  • darkchild165
    February 8, 2007

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    I liek this poem. I think that everyone can relate to it in some way. One question though. Did you intend to use the word lonely twice?