Sometimes
Sometimes I cry because I am lonely
Somtimes I cry because I'm sad
Somtimees I cry becasue I'm lonley
Sometimes I cry because I'm happy
Sometimes I cry for you
Sometimes I laugh because I'm nervous
Sometimes I laugh becauses I'm excited
Somtimes I laugh because I'm surprised
Sometimes I laugh because I'm worried
Somtimes I laugh because of you
Somtimes I get mad because of injustice
Sometimes i get mad because I was hurt
Sometimes I get mad because of you
Please tell me what you think
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We laugh, we cry, and sometimes we don't even know the reasons why. But then I think that might just come with age, and menopause. Sometimes I wish I were young enough to cry over someone but after being married for such a long time, the tears don't come as easily as they did back then. I laugh a lot now, and there are millions of reasons why but the main reason is... I often crack myself up.
Thanks for writing this poem, it gave me lots to think on.
Much Love ♥
Renee
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yeah wht darkchild said is true and i like it as much as i like the other one
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No i didnt mean to use lonley twice but it just kinda happend and after i saw it it just fit so i left it in. -
I liek this poem. I think that everyone can relate to it in some way. One question though. Did you intend to use the word lonely twice?




