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As she stands

Standing alone in the clowded area, her black hair waves in the wind.
Her Amber eyes studing her surroundings.
Her head riddeled with scenes she had wittnessed during her trial.

Now it was her turn, she new that she had done the ultamite crime.
Her bangs covered her eyes as she walked toword the side of the cliff.
Over looking the sleeping village down below.

An Evil smirk spread across her face as the wind blew her hair around her face.
Her eyes lighting up with a new entuseasum.

Her pulse beat through her as if her heart had taken up drum lessons.
Her mind raced as she slowly reached for her swords hilt.
The metal burned her hand as she gripped it tightly.

The sun shown through the clouds as she pulled her sword from it's sheath.
The light reflecting off the blade of the sword sending a aray of light across the herizon.

Her eyes bore into the village as she stared down at it.
Knowing what she was about to do was wrong.
But at thay moment she couldn't care.

Her demonic blood pumped heavily around her body.
Walking to the very tip of the cliff, she passioned herself for the fall.

With out thinking she jumped her feet catching on the side of the cliff, there she found the ability to run full force down it.

Her black heart leaped into her throuat as the villiage came closer.
Her blade sliced through the soft flesh of every human she came into contact with.

Her blade slicing in the thick and fleshy people as if they were rag dolls,
There blood staining her cloths as she passed them.

There screams for help, left un answered.
There dieing wishes lay on the ground along with there bodies.

Coming to a stop, she turned her once black hair now stained with blood.
Her kill still fresh in her sences.
The smile still on her lips she looked over the dead.

Her eyes taking in every drop of blood that lay spilled on the ground.
"I am demon here me roar" she slowly speaks as she turns.
Her tracks covered by the shadows and death that is left in her wake

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this is one dedicated to my character Raven

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  • Bob Fox
    July 24, 2007

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    wow

    I think you have a future in dark writes Perhaps you should seek out an agent... perfect write for our days


    • ravenblade18
      July 24, 2007
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      thank you, I've tried to find an agent but when I applied for it they told me that I was not qualified for wrighting for children, but that might be the reason I wasn't qualified for it lol


  • Flo Varekai
    February 27, 2007
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    sweet

    Your poem seems like a broken up story. You could use alittle more expressive words to help the reader create an image. I however really do love this one alot. You keep the reading going till the end when you end it beautifully. Very good poem.


  • 245Trioxin
    February 22, 2007
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    That same image happens in my head whenever I conjure a positive thought.

    Richly detailed.