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Daytime Excitement (Rictameter)

 

 

 

 

Dripping
Down her body
Sensually rubbing
All alone looking for a thrill
Sexual desire flowing from within
Taking a chance, pleasing herself
Filled with uncontrolled lust
Touching herself
Dripping

A contest entry

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  • BeautifulSecret
    March 5, 2007

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    HOT, and made me flush deep red!! Amazing!! Sensual, erotic, and damn right GREAT!! You are such an amazing poet!


  • Elrenia
    February 15, 2007

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    You have the wrong syllable count in line 2. Congratulations on the placing.

    Thank you for sharing.

    rous


    • Welcome-To-Hell
      February 15, 2007
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      you're right I do not sure how i missed that ill change it thank you for telling me


  • Deceits Tears silver member
    February 10, 2007
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    This is so good it is very sensual nice job


  • calvspw
    February 9, 2007
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    Or isit dripping

    come show me yours, and share with me in mine.

    • Welcome-To-Hell
      February 9, 2007
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      Im not sure I get your comment but thank you none the less


      • calvspw
        February 9, 2007
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        Into the mind,

        I've stepped into yours won't you step into mine?? I've also wrote a poem for the contest, your words show me your mind, come glimpse into mine??

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