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emorantforher

it seems that everything I say
everything I do
Just serves to cram
my foot deeper in my mouth
so I guess it should come as no surprise
that no matter what I do
and no matter what I say
you'll allways choose him
and stain his sleeve with tears
your smile lights my darkest depths, so
I can't tell what's worse
what cuts me deeper, makes me bleed more
not having you with me
or seeing that you are happy
with somebody that's not me...
especially when he
won't treat you good
treat you like he should
you can't understand
but I wish you could

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  • ali34
    October 28, 2007

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    this piece is sad yet really good. the emotion bleeds off the page. well written. i know what you are talking about... been there. thanks for sharing,
    ali


  • February 11, 2007
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    wonderful

    oh my gosh that was simply beautiful.