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Stranded!

 

Oil in this can runs down from my breast to thighs,

as I become induced with a glazed look in my eyes.

Just trying to excite this mechanic behind his desk,

with many unlimited ideas, looking so "Statuesque"

.

I begin seducing him with my gentle smile his way,

while these hips start in motion and softly sway.

Try saving a 'few bucks on my broken down wreck,

I too have other plans figuring "Oh what the heck!"

.

Well, I start with my antics where no one can see,

because my car won't fix itself and works not free.

I'm in kind of a hurry so I need to get this show on,

this won't take long, and I'll be down the road gone.

.

I said: ~Climb aboard~ you one "Hunk" of a man,

just give me a minute while I put down this oil can.

pouring the last drop, as I reached up to my breast,

I'll leave you to imagination, for you know the rest!

 

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  • slipperssun gold member
    February 9, 2007
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    welll at least we can try to guess the rest.... thanks for entering my contest and i wish you well


  • calvspw
    February 9, 2007

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    Oh me oh my imagine you say

    Let me show you mine? into the mind we'll play, come I share with you vanilla whispers of my mind.


  • Disturbed Prodigy
    February 9, 2007

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    hubba, hubba, hubba
    where is this place and how can i get losted there, lol this is a great poem you did something my friend, keep it flowing and good luck in the contest


  • Whoochi gold member
    February 8, 2007

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    woohoooo..loved this...fun...yet sensual in its own form...will make me think twice now everytime I stop and get my oil changed...words flow like the oil in the pic!! Great job...

  • piccola silver member
    February 8, 2007
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    This was unexpected. LOL. very imaginative and full of fun.


  • grannyeri gold member
    February 8, 2007
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    What a unique entry. Trust you to come up with something this original! LOL Really enjoyed this - does it take a mechanic to think of this, or someone with oil on his mind? Sure all will get a good luaght out fo this one. No applauds left, but I'll give you some anyways for this creative write.


    • getsbetter
      February 8, 2007
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      Thank you grannyeri for your wonderful comment. And yeah, leave it up to me huh. Have a blessed day and hope all is going well for you...GETS

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