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Hard Transition

It was a hard transition,
From the stage to the shop.
On the stage she was a natural,
At the shop...jaws dropped.

The manager could tell,
That she was trying her best.
Now if he could just get her,
To quit spilling oil on her chest.

She was very helpful,
The costumers seemed pleased.
His business nearly doubled,
Since she started to grease.

He couldn't just fire,
This gold mine he'd found.
And now she's known as,
The fastest lube around.

 

It was a hard transition,

But it just goes to show.

With hard work and oil,

You can make a lot of dough.

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  • My Darkness
    February 10, 2007

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    lol.. this was cute and soooo funny! your work is just amazing!!!! i'm jealous of you! ...hehe keep it up and good luck in the contest!


  • slipperssun gold member
    February 9, 2007

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    lol still trying to work out if it was a stripper or tipper in her old life...lol i think you portrayed the pic well actually....lol thanks for entering and i wishyou well


  • calvspw
    February 9, 2007
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    dough, lol

    makes one wonder, what the mind see's from your eyes to mine.??


  • Angierie
    February 8, 2007
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    Ooo! I love poems that tell a story.
    Wonderful!
    Angie <3


  • Blankscreen2222
    February 8, 2007
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    cheeky.

    This is a very cheeky write!!
    Well done.

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