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the Relationship Storm

Two weeks at a time
The weather is fine
But one day it goes black
And there’s no looking back
The storm has caused pain
And then comes the rain
It pours in your heart
But can you restart
Can you look for the sun
When the cycles begun
The circle never ends
It’s just a series of bends
It will always be the same
The relationship game
The sun shines bright
Then comes the fight
The fight lasts long
Then you forget who was wrong
The making up is fun
Clouds part for the sun
The sky is blue and clear
But the next fight is just to near

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  • loveaswellashate
    February 8, 2007

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    This was really good.. I liked it alot.. I liked how you used the wheather to describe relationships..Thanks for joing my contest and good luck...
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