Unbreakable barrier holds tight,
As the mask of indecision holds tighter,
Grasping my jacket tighter,
Surrounded by others,
My fragile insides cry,
As I slowly realize,
I'm just another person in the sea of masks.
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A contest entry
- Picture leakage by Vernal.
550 points, ended March 6, 2007, 7 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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I quite like this piece Love. It's a completely different feeling than I got from that particular picture, which is definitely refreshing.
The first and last lines were wonderfully enticing. Thank you very much for entering my contest and good luck.
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