As I reach the age of 62
All thats left for me to do
Is moisturise my aging skin
With slick oil from this watering tin
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A contest entry
- Pic Inspiration- grown ups only 18+ by slipperssun.
380 points, ended February 15, 2007, 11 entries
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cool, short ans sweet and sooo true, well for me!
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hahaha, nice apple. but i have seen your picture, and your not going to need any oil for a very very long time
kaz
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Ha ha
Thanks Kaz your making me blush he he
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he he ha ha
and what my dear would we do should you slip and slide upon mine??
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"Oh my oh my
Well thanks for your reply
I think you may be able to tell
That I am rather shy"
Ha ha ha ha no seriously thanks for the applause
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lol,brilliant Apple and i bet you look great
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Ha ha ha ha yeah I wish, or maybe not lol
Anyway thanks for checkin it out
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Great.......it's funny yet the realization of it is not. I really like it.
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Lol no its not is it ha ha, nm tho life goes on no matter how old we are
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LMAO
Best of luck in the contest with this very funny piece you really made me laugh out loud. Great job
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glad u like it Poetesse
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lol if only we could still look this good as we got older... lol loved it thanks for your entry in my new contest and i wish you luck
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he he he thanks Jen, it maybe short and sweet but just seemed so right ha ha ha.
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