I do for you just as I知 told
Your love for me is always bold
Opening, my eyes each morn
I, anticipate the dawn
Will this day be at last
One that you will take me past
Crossing boundaries like before
Let me be your paramour
Take me, break me, and set me free
With your love, I can guarantee
I will not run, I will not hide
Within these walls, I will reside
Play my body like violins
Tune it deep from within
Chained and bound
I値l still astound
Every whim, I will answer
I be your own, private dancer
I値l move and groove, and gyrate to
Listening only, unto you
Master I now, know my place
I vow to carry out with grace
I値l be here, at your beck and call
I promise you I will enthrall
I will answer only to you
My vows of duty I will renew
For I beg upon my knees
I知 begging you to hear my pleas
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I absolutely love this write. I loved the pic too.
Every whim, I will answer
I be your own, private dancer
Very vivid lines here, I love it. And again, I will never know how you can rhyme erotica...
But you do it so well.
**Ktulu Blackwolfe**
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Great
Very erotic poem, with such a great fow and rthym, you take the reader on a voyage thur poetry, great Job, cheers John
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i think i just drooled more thing nigera falls, this is a hard poem to take me eyes off, you did a great job, love the form, and the poem had a good form too, keep it flowing
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oh my
lol this is great.. I can't think of myself as submissive. I'd probably be the living heck out of someone that tried that with me lo.. But you know what this poem is so hot and steamy. I love it. You've done another great job. Kassie
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I hear your pleas but you must speak louder with your actions than your words
the Satyr -
Are you begging me?
Come on, I wanna see you on knees
I wanna make you scream, please!
I wanna feel your walls squeeze
Let me hear your voice's breeze
nice done job here. I was good to know you know your place! (LOL).. You actually weren't the 1st for a change. teheheh (lol)
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