Two souls that are joined as one.
Our lives together have just begun.
It is no mystery that our love is true.
My heart belongs to you.
You are my angel sent from God
to help me carry on.
When I had given up on life and love.
The angels sent you from heaven above.
Taught me how to believe again,
became my lover and my friend.
February 8, 2007
Author notes
option #26 Love
Dedicated to my husband Jason my one true love
In a list
A contest entry
- Love poetry by Kiran.
450 points, ended February 11, 2007, 14 entries
Honorable winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Lots and lots and lots and lots and lots and lots and lots of options by Kevan.
480 points, ended February 22, 2007, 58 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - New Love... by XxContinualSlinkyxX.
425 points, ended March 20, 2007, 29 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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A Beautiful heartfelt write! I enjoyed reading it! Thanks for sharing!
Spreading some love,
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Sweet Love
I think you have found the key in this fine poem. Good for you my friend & Ty for your kind comment
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Thanks for the wonderful comments. I am so lucky to have found my soul mate in my husband Jason. I thought mine did not exist. I guess we should never give up on love because I found it shows up when you least expect it. Thanks again for the kind comments and applauses
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Thank you so much for entering and good luck!!!! Great write!!!!
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I can't find Two Hears Joined As one on my list or in your contest, it is really weird my other one A Sacred Bond is there.
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My poem does not seem to be on your list and I can't find it on mine, do you think it is just a site problem and will fix itself?
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Hey, I enjoyed this poem quite a bit. What made me laugh though was the fact that it was written on my friends b-day. Good Luck!
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awwwwwwwwwww this is an adorable poem to your husband!!!! Awesome job!!!!!!
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This is really really beautiful and so full of warmth and love. I loved this. Thanks so much for entering and all the best!
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Awww that is so sweet. I love the hearts background. You are lucky to have each other. I hope you will be happy for a long time.
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What a wonderful tribute! I hope that you shared it with him. He sounds wonderful. I'm happy that you found someone that can make you so happy, and I hope he appreciated this little love token. --->pixxie<---
P.S. Hood-wink
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Another beauty! I love these tributes from the heart! It gives me a warm fuzzy,... lol and I feel the very same way about my hubby which makes it all the more sweeter! Keep penning those thoughts of love my friend... it brings lots of joy and smiles! Best wishes and have a blessed day!
Frogz
"Hoodwink"
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Theresa, another beautiful write you have penned here, which I am not at all surprised! Your husband is one lucky man to have a wife like yourself in his life as you are to have him, you are so lucky to have found each other, we all have angels in our life sent from heaven above and looks like you both found yours in each other. Your rhythm and rhyme flowed beautifully throughout the entire poem. Good luck in the contest, sounds golden to me. Well done my friend
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A lovely write. Beautiful flow, rhyme and tone. Deep expression of emotion. Your love for your husbands shines brightly in this piece. Good word choice. Nice alliteration. Only one observation, in the first line of your last couplet there is a misspelled word: "believe". Other than that this is a well crafted piece and a most enjoyable read. Shelley
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Awww...this is so deeply moving! I know that love has found you and there's no one that deserves that happiness more than you, Theresa! I'm so happy for you that you have Jason in your life. You were the brightest star in his sky, that's why he picked you!
Beautiful, loving piece! Best of luck in the contest!
~Lori
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