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Because of You

I think I値l go for a walk
Maybe out in the rain
Maybe let the tears roll down my face
And not feel the pain
Maybe think about something
Maybe think about you
Yeah, yeah you

Think of the way that you walk
Watch the way that you move
And hear the sound that is your voice
Say my name
[Yeah, the sound of my name]
I知 gonna get over you
I値l forget about you soon
[I hope]

Maybe I値l light up a joint
And take a walk on the moon
Maybe I値l try to forget about you
And the way you make me feel
I値l try to wipe the image of you
When you stopped to smile at me

Because of you im inclined to lose my mind
Every time I think of you I go quietly insane
I don稚 know what to do about you
I don稚 know how to get over you
But, do I really want to?
[Do I really want to?]

I think I値l go for a walk
Maybe out in the rain
Maybe let the tears roll down my face
And not feel the pain
I値l light up a joint
And take a walk on the moon
And maybe, just maybe
I値l forget about you
[Forget you]

Because I go quietly insane
Every time I think of you

Author notes

I wrote this in English today....shhhh....don't tell the teacher! lol

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  • DarkestAngel68
    March 26, 2007

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    OMG This Is SO good

    This is exactly where I am right now in my life.
    This is such a good poem. Light up one for me.
    I can SOOOOOOOOO relate to this poem.
    VERY GOOD WORK!

  • meena krish
    February 18, 2007

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    This is a situation most of us can relate to. It is so hard
    to forget them especially the one we gave our heart to.
    I like the flow and feelings of this write...very nice.
    Take care.


  • LovePoetryMusic
    February 13, 2007
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    so real....

    I feel really connected to this poem...and to you in a sense i guess(since you wrote it) I love how you interjected your thoughts into it, like you were speaking to me from the words...weird, but in a good way. Keep up the great writing. ~LPM~


  • CazzieJade
    February 8, 2007

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    Thomas!
    Dont write poetry in english!!!
    You were meant to be listening to the very bad actors speak bout macbeth