Stars
Shining,
In your eyes,
Reflecting love
Illuminating,
Transcending space,
Reaching out
To me,
Hearts
Aching,
Wanting you,
Needing your touch,
Following my heart
To find you there,
Within dreams,
Always
Mine.
A contest entry
- Just flow and let yourself go. by Blueskywonder.
1200 points, ended February 9, 2007, 17 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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thanks lol i am a bit dreamy i know, just close you eyes and let the mind roam the sparkles of imagery with smiles
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GREAT WRITE
this one talks to me and lets me see myself in it as it can with others in there own ways
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This is truly a beautiful poem which captivates from the first word, the sentiments portrayed with in this write are truly touching.Well done and thankyou for entering my contest. Good luck.
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Oh, I like this...This new form of yours is alluring, I must give it a try, you do it wonderfully. Excellent flow, I love the way it evolves..Great write
Whyitt U xxx -
i love it beth
your form sets off these type of poem butifuly ..good luck in the contest ~cheeky~
x
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This is a very deep piece, it is also very sad to me. Makes me think this person (you?) has a lonely heart maybe reminescing. Well done, goodluck in the contest too.
Lil
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