I don't want to know,
where the other road goes.
I'd rather wish it away,
and let the memory fade.
But I can't do that.
So the memory remains.
This is where I'm at,
Standing inside the flames.
I don't want be
another faded dream,
and I'm trying to be strong,
but I face this world alone.
But I can't do that,
because the memory remains.
So this is where I'm at,
Standing inside the flames.
Give me away
to the one who makes me fade,
I want to let go again.
Give me a way
to make it through the day,
I want to feel life again.
But I can't do that,
So the memory remains.
This is where I'm at,
Standing inside the flames.
Standing inside the flames.
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a song I wrote. Click here to see the video.
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Wow, I just saw the video of the song. The music is awesome and the lyrics are really good. You amaze me Brian. Excellent job. You are so good. And I loved how you played guitar by the way. You are definitely talented. Keep using that talent and you will get to great places.
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I really like this! The rhyme scheme is very nice. My favorite part is "So the memory remains.
This is where I'm at,
Standing inside the flames"
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Bryan,
not one to read lyrics, as they tend to be extremely different form conventional poetry, but this had a certain rythm to it that I could imagine would work well to music. Also the line lengths seemed to fit well the structure of a song, and the language was easy to get off the tongue, key in singing. Great job.
Jim
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Scientists say that in the center of the fire, there is cold. Tell me then, are the flames cold or warm?
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cold... numbing cold.
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Wow
Great song. I love the line standing inside the flames... great line. Well written, thanks for sharing this with us all. Take care.
Tali
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