Arched back
Glossolalia rain
Drips from my lips
Never thought it could be like this
From just one kiss.
Tension between the masts
Taut muscles strain
To keep it under control.
Dam broke that night
Neither could wait any longer
Never done this before
Dizzy in wonderment
Lifting my head I can't believe
No other lover has taken me to such heights
Even on the very first night.
Joining, becoming one
Was the first time in my life
I ever felt like I was home.
Author notes
a priceless feeling, now lost...
drenched with the memory of it...
A contest entry
- Just flow and let yourself go. by Blueskywonder.
1200 points, ended February 9, 2007, 17 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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flowing night and flowing words
wow this has power and true sentiment witin the lines of delight and passion, wonderfully done with style and carissma,,,blessings of love,light,life....Fire Storm
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What a beautifully sentimental piece of poetry, the imagery portrayed aswell as the warming passionate content all added to making this a wonderfully warm piece of poetry.Well done and thankyou for sharing such lovely thoughts with us.Also thankyou for entering my contest and good luck.
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And the wind wisps memories,
the taste never forgotten,
A hieght of sensuality held forever,
A blessing; A dream; Held intranced,
A memory of intense seduction...
Yo..Is a cool write.....
J
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