I got
I got this view.
A view
A view from above.
If I follow along
My memory will last
If I fall away
My memory will stray
Conformity pleases
Opposition ceases
Listen
Listen I speak the truth.
Right now
Right now I follow along.
A contest entry
- The sound of silence by Moonlit-Reveries.
450 points, ended February 24, 2007, 36 entries
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Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Conformity pleases.... yes it does but what do you want? You have a voice... let it flow.... Best of luck to you in the contest
Take care
Tali
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Very nice. It's so much easier to follow something you don't believe in silently, than to speak up for yourself and break the silence. It's been a struggle for me and it's something I'm working on myself. It's so empowering when we become comfortable breaking that silence.
Thanks for entering and best of luck in my contest. -
hi i think this is for those who cannot speak, are silenced into conformity, good work i appreciate it
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