My voice has been lost
No melody from my mind
Only silence escapes these lips
Like a guitar with no strings
No strings to strum my life
No life to bring a beat
The drum roll of my heart silent
Lost for no one to keep
Please tell me what you think
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Yes yes
As always brilliant work, I've been having writers block recently and it sucks, first time in my life I haven't been able to write
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Whoa-
Happy to see You back busy bee
Powerful verse You have penned and may the voice
come back so we could hear that melody once more~
Beautifully penned~ I imagine there are others
who can relate too~
Thank You for sharing Your Talent!
Many blessings to You
Best wishes too
and much love~ Desire~*~
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wow, for something you wrote just before going you to sleep you did an awesome job.
I love the way you used music and the drums to compare to you.
I hope you find your voice soon.
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I appreciate it
I hope so too.
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