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To She

I can't be a saint, I wont be a sinner,
I'll only be me, and that's your lover.
You fathom friendship, I deduce deeper,
You claim it's affection, but I am already a weeper.
You had a choice and you chose right.
It's my fault that i face this plight.
You're not to blame, you never did sway,
It's entirely my fault for not keeping it at bay.
Alas! i have said it, and ruined you most.
Cursed neither with friendship nor nuptial toast.
It's only right that you despise my soul,
There is nothing i can now expect in whole.
I am happy for you and what'll become of your life.
I hope you remember me and my meaningless strife.
It's come to this, sad but true.
No more can I be anyone more than a who.
You've gained your desires, your future's bright blue.
For me though, in a different way, it's all blue too.
With what's left of me this love song i write.
Knowing this is the first and last time it'll ever be sung right.

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  • xxRainbowDawnxx
    February 15, 2008

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    it's all you can be... That person who is going to the given person with all their heart and more.


  • LucyLightning
    August 23, 2007
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    good job & good luck in the contest.
    This was an interesting piece. =]


  • twiztidXxXbeauty
    February 14, 2007
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    this is really good

    whos this about? i miss u so much happy valentine day

    • bubbasamuel
      February 16, 2007
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      hi. how r u? well this is about a a denial that's left me quite devastated. but it's not that person's fault at all. i am the cause for my own pain.

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