Your love whispers to me
supports me when I stumble
tears down my walls of insecurities
blankets me with warm feelings of comfort
and surrounds me with protective arms~
Author notes
Don't know if it is exquisite, but 5 lines it is.
In a list
A contest entry
- Valentines Day Card. by Poetic Aphrodite.
525 points, ended February 8, 2007, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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this is beautiful. and the love you describe
sounds wonderful, but the one line, the one
special line that made this kind of love that
you described absolutely perfect, is :
"tears down my walls of insecurities"
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Aww so beautiful, I love the impact gives me, with only five lines, I wish you the best for the contest, tis a wonderful entry
Karen -
This is so beautiful! I do hope you're working on a book. Hugs, Patricia
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This is really sweet.
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Thanks Bryan, where have you been hiding at my friend?...your pen needs to flow so I might be inspired to write better than sweet...lol. You rock!
Becky
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Very nice, I tried to come up with something and just drew a blank - you did very well conveying beauty in five lines.
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Thank you very much, sometimes it just rolls and sometimes it doesn't. love is not my thing right now, but this just somehow flowed onto the paper. Again appreciate the comment
Becky
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WOW! whatt an awsome and beautiful Valentines day card...I think its very exquisite...nice...better than Hallmark!
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Thanks Iggy, You rock sweetie and thanks for the great comments you leave me. Maybe hallmark will call me...lol.
Peace and love
Becky
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Thankyou for your beautiful submittal, Bella
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Well I liked it...shot through the heart to me..lol
Great piece!
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