Pretty princess, pink porcine perfection,
gilt of my dreams, accept my affection!
I~hay ove~Lay You~hay
I'll shower your plumpness with gifts galore,
private mud baths, silk purses and much more!
ay~Say You'll~hay e~Bay ine~May
You would look prime in a necklace of pearl
and big satin bow on a pigtail curl.
iss~Kay e~May
I won't hog the trough, I'll save some for you,
only promise that your heart remains true!
on't~Day eak~Bray My~hay eart~Hay
I'll not boar you with the corny details,
I hope my pudgy devotion prevails!
My~hay iggy~Pay ank~Bay Is~hay Yours~hay
Please, say you won't squeal on this portly swine,
Just be my precious piggy Valentine!
orky~Pay And~hay etunia~Pay orever~Fay
Author notes
My apologies to Warner Brothers Contest: Pig Latin
By Azure 85 2/22/07 Bronze Trophy
Please tell me what you think
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This was just to funny I loved it
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Glad you enjoyed Jeff, TY!
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Awww, this is so cute. I love how you wrote it in pig latin, about a pi.
Such a cute write, and I love the picture!
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Lol. the 3rd lines of each stanza are fun. I like your rhymes. Did you purposely write "boar" instead of "bore?" This poem was really fun to read. It was great! Everything about your poem was fun!
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It is clear to see why a trophy was placed upon your shelf. This is well written. There is great rhyme and meter and it offers such a spirit lifter. You cant help but smile when you read this piece. I did all the way to the end. Well done and very creative. You are indeed a fine poet.
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Thanks, angel! This was one of those 'just for fun' things
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I loved it and I really enjoyed it!! Great Job!!!!
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wow...this is great!!!!!! i luv it!!!!!! so warm & happy, its a great way 2 cheer up if ur down, i must say!!! i hope all goes well 4 the piggy!
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Ha!
That was cute!! Pig latin, I haven't seen that since I was a schoolgirl...tooooo many moons ago
Awesome work and I can clearly see why you pulled a trophy on this one! Congratulations, well deserved This was certainly my pleasure to read ~Tia
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Sweet piggy paradise!
True love is everywhere. X -
this was a very cute poem. The only suggestion is that you put the pig latten elsewhere, like at the bottom, because when the reader pauses to figure out the pig latten it can take away from the poem. That is just a suggestion of corse.
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Thank you, Elven fairy. Your comments are much appreciated
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how cute with the piggy's and the pig latin! This was very sweet adn cute!
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LOL Sweet Petunia and Porky, they were an adorable couple. An adorable poem, and lovely use of Pig Latin in honor of the poem's theme!
Ood-gay ucklay in the ontestcay!
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Thank you, azure This contest was a fun mind game, hadn't spoken pig latin for ~ decades
You never forget it! Appreciate the Trophy and points ~ kudos to you!!!
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Very good and cute
This is very good and very cute. I don't know pig latin, but I could figure out what you were saying. I guess I could learn it from you, but I'd probably never use it. Much success in the contest.
Thought I should drop by and check out some of your work.
Andy
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