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Hue of Love



In this hue of love, I find
you embracing my heart.
Serenely, I beam with your
grace. Falling, falling,
madly in love with...You.

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  • Wayne Leon Learmond
    February 9, 2007

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    BEAUTIFUL

    I LOVE THIS. SHORT TO THE POINT, AND VERY VERY BEAUTIFUL INDEED. DEEP EMOTIONS HERE. YOU ARE VERY A VERY TALENTED WRITER.


  • Applehead
    February 8, 2007
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    Passionate Love

    Brilliantly expressed well done


  • Poetic Aphrodite
    February 8, 2007
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    Thankyou for your beautiful submittal, Bella


  • Peteskid gold member
    February 8, 2007
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    fabulous writing

    very expressive..lovely


  • marc creamore
    February 7, 2007
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    Ah . . . this is so sweet and beautifully said . . . a wonderful valentine Lady L.

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