Black button eyes will stare,
and soft fuzzy brown hair to tear.
For you I can spare this hair.
For I’m your teddy bear.
These eyes blankly stare,
but don’t dare to think I won’t care.
I listen each word you share.
For I’m your teddy bear.
I’m near for each sad prayer,
even if you aren’t aware, I’m there.
My love I will declare to the air.
For I’m your teddy bear.
A contest entry
- Love poetry by Kiran.
450 points, ended February 11, 2007, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - ~Love Me Tender~ by -Ink Artist-.
525 points, ended February 16, 2007, 40 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - la la la love! by j-ay rose.
535 points, ended March 8, 2007, 75 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
my girlfriend calls me her teddy bear.. go figure
Comments
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cute (:
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Adorable piece. Your internal rhyming matching end line rhyming was interesting. Thanks for your entry and good luck!
~Lori
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Sweet poem, this flowed really well and I liked the rhyme scheme you used. Thanks so much for entering and all the best to you!
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Dude this one is really good, I would say take out the For in "For I listen each word you share" and a comma in "even if you aren't aware, I'm there" And take out the for in "For my love I will declare to the air." of course that is if you want to, but i think it would flow better that way. Cheesy but good man.
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