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Twin Goddesses

 




She was empowered

   by the weakness in her eyes,

       and the dirt upon her knees,

It was there;

    With stiffening wax,

        and whelps taking mold to her back

            that She craved to make her scream.

 

A devious smile crept

       across Her luscious lips

          as Her cat – o – nail kissed

submissive flesh repeatedly;

     and baby blues

          fought back tears caused

     by painful pleasure

              while begging for more.

 

Emerald orbs

        demand silence

   with a dominating gaze

held steady

by fisted golden locks;

   yet, jarred by the scent

       of beading sweat,

          and cruel punishment.

 

 

Binding leather

  bites at her reddened skin

     whilst thighs of honey are spread.

As her body trembles -

      she suffers the full force

          of Her Mistress’ passion.

 

Her fingers waltz along

    slick columns

         parting heaven's gates;

with caramel peaks assaulted

             by pinches, twists and pulls,

lips part and spill

    whispered moans of ecstasy.

 

Tongues swirl

          through sighing lips-

      Diving

     to swallow the other whole;

  while bodies enfold the

flames of destined delight.

 

Heat meshed with heat -

   fire blazes and cascades

      upon the walls within;

twin Goddesses,

Domination and Submission

      collide

in a volcanic eruption

                   of molten bliss.


Author notes

option 4

collaboration between luckynsincere and myself (celticmoon)

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  • Lady-Pegasus
    February 27, 2007

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    Thank you for your contest submission.Tastefully done piece of eroticism to be certain! I normaly prefer to point out these in IM for both of our sakes, but ah blind judging, hehe :
    and whelps taking mold to she back
    should that not be her back not she back?
    Otherwise, wow, I ahve to say a very sophisticated and elegant write well done! Best of luck in this and all of your endeavors. Hetohke'e *


  • slipperssun gold member
    February 27, 2007

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    wow what a tale youhave told... fantastic collab between two great writers... thanks for entering the contest and i wish you luck


  • SensualWhispers
    February 27, 2007
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    Very nice.

    I love the erotica in this poem and how clean it is. It is very well written and extremely well thought out. I enjoyed the whole poem. and the way it was written. Thank you for entering and the best of luck to you. Kassie


  • Blazing White Wolf
    February 8, 2007

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    as i stated already Mytwo girls heated the room up 5 or 8 notches woohoo delicious write her girls lovee you both

    love,
    Master


  • Sylvyrwyng gold member
    February 7, 2007

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    Ummmmmm

    Sis... stop teasing all the others out there now.... lolol... you will make them all to hot to handle this passionate nature of yours... hhehehehe besides... welll, nothing, never mind... lololol


  • Cherokee
    February 7, 2007
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    Well, it was definitely erotic.


    • Celticmoon
      February 7, 2007
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      rarely if ever mention body parts......99% of the time keep imagery without smut....metaphors can be a good thing

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