It's alright
In a mysterious way
I got knocked down
But I'm okay
It's not what you expect
This isn't a typical love tale
You see it isn't that at all
This isn't about a sexy male
This is about getting knocked down
By the most mysterious thing of all
I'll tell you closer to the end
Of how I had my fall
I didn't actually fall
I really just got injured
Don't panic it wasn't bad
As you might have pictured
I yelled as I got scraped and bruised
Not for the obvious reason
I think I just have bad luck
Especially in this season
So now I get to my point
It just comes down to commonsense
Never turn your back to
An unscrewed wooden fence!
Please tell me what you think
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Your fence is random like cheetos
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LOL. This is such a wonderful poem to read!! I loved the suspense in it and the ending was quite surprising.
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Thankyou! I like to throw little surprises around, catch people unaware. I'm glad you enjoyed it!
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tapit amelia tap it hard!! Mum would be proud lol! Lovin da poem, tis hell good @ da end wid da fence lol.
Much luv n tappin!!!
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yesh grand just grand workm=... tell me, why tha hell am i on this site still??????? ahah great use of words thu, always have always will, seeya l8ter yeah?
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Ahahahahahaaa!!! =D Iloveyou! This is awesome, complete brilliance! Made me laugh! xD
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Teehee glad you liked it!!
Hehe, oh boy...I can't remember everything I said at Em's :S Worried!
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This is brilliant! The rhyming was spectacular and it just proves that great poets like you can write absolutely anything! Great work!
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Lol, thanks Em! Glad you enjoyed it!!
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haha great one meelz. loved it, i thought it was going to be about a heart break or soemthing but i was proved wrong. this is a good old aussie poem.
Keep up the great writes.
Becky
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Hey Becky!!! Hehe yay! My evil scheme worked!!
I'm happy you liked it!!! Hehe!
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Omfg, tops. Hehe I love your style of writing, it's excellent. And I see you keep getting better and better. By the way, the best word in the poem was PANIC. Woohoo.
Hope you're well.
-M xo
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