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Writer's Block

Here I sit, at night, I write to immortalize,
your blue eyes, but I must apologize
for this won’t justify the sensation
of temptation, one will feel.
Your eyes, no description, far too real.

A contest entry

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  • Poetic Aphrodite
    February 8, 2007
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    Thankyou for your beautiful submittal, Bella