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Bloody Valentine

You lied to me,
cheated on me,
and deceived me.

Now you will both die,
but her first.
I just want to make you suffer
like I did when you cheated on me
with her.

She doesn't even like you!
as I did.
She can't stand you,
and you don't see it.

Now watch her die.
Because you're going to see,
how much I love you.
Also how much you hurt me
This Valentine's Day
you’re the


BLOODY VALENTINE!

Author notes

This is just a poem I thought of. The name came from a Good Charlette song, called "Bloody Valentine." I hope you like it.
This was fixed up by Malabu. Thank you, Mally.

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  • care bear love
    February 8, 2007
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    Sorry I forgot to applaud lol

  • care bear love
    February 8, 2007

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    I liked this poem. I loved the way you got your emotions out and how you showed how hurt you were. Great Job!!!! I loved it. Keep up the good work!

    Casey


  • Maybe Anastasia
    February 7, 2007

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    Wow alot of anger and hurt in here. I like it, its dark and emotional! my only suggestion is like I did when you cheated on me
    with her
    She doesn't even like you
    like I do
    you say like ALOT. lol try subbing words for it. (: good write though.