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Fire In Ya Eyez

Dave love dough and you the toppings on my pizza
The heater to my ether, my beautiful senorita
And I knew you was my girl from the first, moment I seized ya
And just like, every blunt needs some green
Every gun needs a beam, every thug needs a queen

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  • galfalfa gold member
    February 14, 2007
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    Well surely every girl would love to be the heater to her guy's ether...very well expressed as far as an old fogey like me can grasp,

    Thanks for commenting on my piece, enjoyed this one,

    galfalfa


  • Poetic Aphrodite
    February 8, 2007
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    Thankyou for your submittal, Bella