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Stars

The love of one person is needed by many
The love of many is needed by one
But the love from you is enough
To make the stars outshine the sun

A contest entry

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  • Applehead
    February 8, 2007
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    Wow

    This beautiful


  • City-of-Angels
    February 7, 2007

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    aww

    its so CUTE.
    Its so short and such a good point to it too!
    LOVE IT
    Only thing I can suggest is maybe a more creative title.
    Cute poem!


  • Poetic Aphrodite
    February 7, 2007
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    Thankyou for your beautiful submittal, Bella