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A Tanka for Valentine's Day

Everything I am
Everything I hope to be
I will share with you
You are the man of my dreams
My life's partner forever.

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  • doctorbug
    February 7, 2007
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    Perfect

    I know your love will adore this poem. I can actually see it as the inside of a Valentine card. Those of us who are not as gifted must rely on you wonderful poets so say the things that are in our hearts. Congratulations on a fantastic write!


  • sunny day
    February 7, 2007

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    Bravo!!! Bravo!!! Bravo!!!

    This is absolutely exquisite. Your words radiate with love for this special man and day. A love like this is hard to find and when you do you should treasure it with all you have. Thank you for sharing your gift with all of us and best wishes in the contest. Sighing at the beauty of this. Love and God bless, Joyce


  • Poetic Aphrodite
    February 7, 2007
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    Thankyou for your beautiful submittal, Bella