if we could see the world
it would be
a sweeping statement
of moonlit moments entwined
and dappled kisses filled with two hearts beating...
A contest entry
- Valentines Day Card. by Poetic Aphrodite.
525 points, ended February 8, 2007, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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awwww this is sooo sweet... i love it soo soo much...totally should win the contest...its is soo cute it just gives me a warm feeling inside!!
~~~~~ in love in death ~~
~~~~~`
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good write
this paints the perfect picture. i wish life was this way. (speaking for myself, of course) love GYPSYfish -
OH! im lost for words! its short, but beautiful, breathtaking, lovely, exquisite! i especially like the last line...ok actually i especially like the last 5 lines *cough cough i know that there are only five lines*
anyways: yeah: so: iloveit♥ -
Thankyou for your beautiful submittal, Bella
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