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Gaze

Gazing, in one another’s  eyes
We stand surrounded by our love
Around us snowflakes fall
Oohh so gently from above

As delicate as we are
They are floating with such grace
Against our skin their coldness warms
As I kiss your handsome face

Soft crunching under foot
We walk the path to home
Chocolate and your arms will warm me
Together we’ll never be alone

Bright burning embers light our faces
Warmed inside with such a glow
Forever we are thoughtful
Loving one another so

So much the fire burns
Our embrace at last is known
An embodiment of one
Now the love we have is shown


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  • Blueskywonder
    February 8, 2007
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    This is a truly beautiful piece of poetry full of sentiment and love, the picture you paint is truly wonderful.Well done and thankyou for entering my contest.Good luck.


    • Applehead
      February 9, 2007

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      Thank you. Cold wintery days are the best time for the warmth of Love