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Your String Less Guitar

Play me a melody
On your string less guitar
Make my heart swim with jealousy
About all in your life that is right

Play me a song
With your string less guitar
Make me feel useless
And realize all I have wrong

Sing me a Ballad
With your string less guitar
Fill my ears with music
And make me wish it would stop

Write me a verse
Use your string less guitar
About all the ways
You are better

Sing me a lullaby
On your string less guitar
Mock me with your ego
Make me feel helpless and small

Lay me to sleep
With your String less guitar
Challenge me to best you
Then crush me with your strength

Sing me a song
With your string less guitar
Prove to me
That we’ll never be equal

Sing something
Write something
Play something
Prove something
On your string less guitar

What would make this time different?

Please tell me what you think

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  • CrimsonAcid93
    August 10, 2007
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    one question

    i really like this, that why im kinda of taking someof it to write a new song is that okay with you i just wanna b sure so u dont get mad if my band makes it big and u hear it

    hehe

    answer back

  • CrimsonAcid93
    August 8, 2007

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    wow

    amazing i must say


    im a guitarist and that actually makes more sense to a guitarist/poet than to n e one else, but it was really good keep it up