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I'd give you a 4.5, but i'm not the one who choked

Restrain and take longing to my shallow being, For god only knows the sin shall spread
Dance with me brother, dance to the light that fills their hearts with dread
Drown your pitty in the flame that burns in the wind before you
Illuminating a life , extricating all those that lie in the prescence of evil

I tell you this, that i have sinned, before your eyes i shall begin, to tell of all the things i've done, underneith the midnight sun.

I've spun the stories, the rumors grew
I no longer comprehend what's untrue
I feed the temptation and taste it as well
In some eyes an unholy spell

If i had a gun, i'd take two shots of vodka
If i had a shot, I'd inject you with this poison
If i could inject every thought of violence and rage, and resentment that i posses
Then your world would come to a bitter sweet end, drenched in lonlieness

I'm a level 8 disaster, but i'll rock like a superstar
If it comes down to death of my soul
I'm breaking down but i'll hold my self together because that's the difference between who i am and who i'll be, suicide watch has never been so observant before

I long to love, and love to lust, and lust all that i'm not
I want to breahte, instead of feel, reverse my heart my thought




Bite the pen i choose to write with, use the right to fall apart again

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  • erininthesky
    February 17, 2007
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    All I can say is.. wow...


  • February 15, 2007
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    M-Fucking-Amazing

    you know taylor ur really good at writng


  • Head Underwater
    February 7, 2007

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    badass!

    this is a kickass write, i love it! i was already loving just by the name, ock on, and dammit dont stop writing!!