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March with love

I march to the steps
Flanks and Slides
While I march with my instrument at my side
Forwards, Backwards, Left, Right
The drum major conducts fast and furious
March with compassion
March with love.
Play the song while we keep the beat.
Make sure life is sweet
March with compassion
March with love.

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Written June 14th, 2003

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  • February 6, 2005
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    Exellent. I agree and applaud.

  • whitewave21
    June 15, 2003
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    what about obliques... and _ count turns? Oh wait...I haven't taught you those yet
    *~*Aaria*~*


  • Punky Brewster
    June 14, 2003
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    marching is great