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disaster forever

I try to recall the
steps that led me
back to grey

            True intent
followed in despair
                  equals disaster
Your pallet
maintaines rich power

When mingled with mine
brush strokes turn sour

My path, led;
Not meant to be followed

I shall hold your
ART
within a thousand dreams

As hopes of
smearing again
Ride far through time

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  • gracefulodium
    February 29, 2008
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    art is recognised in all cultures as many different things. thats talent...


  • briareus gold member
    February 8, 2007

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    Mixing of even a few incompatible colors produces grey. Intent was true by my standards, despair unacceptable (denial? suppression?) Good that you hold the art within your dreams, whoever the artist was -- 'We have art in order not to die of truth.'