Ever tighter spirals claim you.
Never once but many times more you spiral deeper to the depths of hatred.
How many times must you leave me?
Only once more do I wait again...
Six like the world of flying pictures;
I held you.
How many times must you fall to never get up?
Author notes
I have started just writing poems. Without thinking at all. It's kind of cool, but i think i'm on the brink of ruining them by not thinking enough. Advice would be great. What do you think of this poem?
A contest entry
- Just flow and let yourself go. by Blueskywonder.
1200 points, ended February 9, 2007, 17 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Spirals of depth control the souls of the pre-damned...
Holding on to your undying love ~ but letting you slip,
Until the mirrored life I lead is shattered
upon the pavement of destruction....
Ummmm..... Very inspiring I would say this write is....
You have done a fantastic job on this random poem.
I like it...
Jeffro
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I think this is full of thought provoking imagery and content and stands fine the way it is.A very interesting piece full of wonder.Well done and thankyou for entering my competition.Good luck.
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