He locks his front door
and double checks the back and windows.
He then gets in his car
and starts to fire up the engine.
But the steering wheel jams
just as he notices his curtains twitch...
A contest entry
- Just flow and let yourself go. by Blueskywonder.
1200 points, ended February 9, 2007, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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and....??? I need more! I am sitting on the edge of my seat! The suspense is killing me!
Well done!
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Very eerie... almost scary... you have done a wonderfull job in drawing the reader in-to this thought provoking piece.Well done and thankyou for entering my competition.Good luck.
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Gosh, what a terrible sight and feeling! I hope that this never did happen to you. Great work with this one. Very thought provoking and well written piece.
Thank you for sharing this!
Jeremy0826
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