You hurt me in all the wrong places
You touched something you shouldn't have
You showed me a different side of you
For all the wrong reasons
You made me hurt from inside
You made me want to lay there
You made me want to crawl up and die
What you did was wrong
There's no admitting it
You made me think of a broken record
Playing over and over
Till the song wore down to nothing
Like my innocence for you
A contest entry
- Just flow and let yourself go. by Blueskywonder.
1200 points, ended February 9, 2007, 17 entries
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Ahh... this is a moving piece of poetry; you have expressed your words of sorrow with clarity and precision.Well done and thankyou for entering my contest.Good luck.
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