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Bali Hi

Tropical Island of mind's escape,
let Palm arms surround me,
enfold me,
release stresses wake.
Let me sleep beneath Moonbeams,
on warm sequined sands.
In Coconut groves ,
hide away, from sad circumstance.
With Sun's shattered dawn,
let me bask in warm sunlight pools.
Help me remember always, to be no master's fool.
Hidden Island of mystery,
hold the hand, of a tan, Island child.
Take away sad memories, let inhibitions run wild.













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  • Blue Rew silver member
    February 8, 2007
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    let Inhibitions run wild

    Very well put and imagery fits well with that of the art. Good luck! Blue


  • JazzALTernative silver member
    February 7, 2007
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    Yeah - no stress - just childlike playfulness in paradise. Thanks, I needed that.


  • Poetic Aphrodite
    February 7, 2007
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    Thankyou for your most exquisite submittal, Bella


  • Puppydog gold member
    February 7, 2007

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    TRULY BEAUTIFUL!

    Oh how I wish I was there right now, if I was I would never leave. This is so beautiful and inspiring.