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bye love

Thoughts left lingering
amongst stale air
I know what must be;
Empty grasps
impailed by confusion
Promises of lifeless
penetration

Love lies

It's sweet aroma
mingles putrid odors
My flesh stained

My tongue
left bleeding
A taste so pure
I abide its teaching

Yet, I must release
you

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  • Theater Of Dreams
    February 7, 2007

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    Ouch!

     Just wondering what inspired this magic...you are a gifted writer and poet- and I am glad I found you, or you found me...whatever.

     Sometimes you young people can bare deep emotions in such a small space- it's scary. I envy it, however!

     Thanks for sharing your art.

    -James.