Seventeen days away
Till you will be gone two years
I still miss you a lot
Most can tell that by my tears
It seems it has been forever
Since I have seen your smiling face
But you are in the arms now
Of gods good grace
My heart is still broken
It is so hard to move on
My friends say I can make it
That I am like you, so strong
You took part of my with you
That night you died
Ever since then
Every night I continued to cry
You were a best friend
But you were also more
You were a loving grandfather
Of that I am sure.
It is hard to say goodbye
After all these years gone by
I try to wipe the water from my eyes
So I can go on and never cry
What I am saying is
I love you
And I know, even though I can’t hear it
You love me too
Please tell me what you think
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this is really sad v.v but the more positive, yet strange sorrow at the end was just haunting, but so sweet. It's always hard to lose someone, and never really know where they've gone, if you'll see them again, if they are happy, if they can be happy, if they still exist, so all you can do is just hope for the best without being ignorant to everything that might be.
But you are strong, it takes a strong person to cry
GREAT job
diggin it majorly
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Sentiments well expressed in these lines - easy to read and understand that you are feeling pretty heartbroken still, with memories that are pretty raw yet. Am sure you will think of a good title for this piece. Each poem should have it't own identiy, not just untitled, like so many are.
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Great Work, Liz.
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This is beautiful. I still remember that day that you came to school crying and i tried so hard to cheer you up. I know it's hard especially since it's almost been 2 years since that day. You've come a long way since then but in a way you're still in the past. We all know your grandfather was a great man. From every thing you've told me about him and from how he helped make you the way you are. You're a great person and i know if he were here he'd be proud of you for keeping his memory in your heart. He was very special to you and i understand why. You may still be stuck at that day and i noticed on that day a part of you that i once knew disappeared forever but you can't keep living in the past. I've seen you relive that day over again. i could tell just by looking in your eyes that part of you was missing and would never return. I understand and I'm here for you just like i've always been. I know your grandfather loves you and i can tell how much you loved him and still do. you're truly an amazing person and I'm sure he's watching over you and thinking the same thing. so keep holding on to his memory. Don't let it go just so you can tell everyone just how special he truly was. this was a wonderful write. One of your best. Great write.
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a phrase (i'm not sure if i heard before or i made it once): "now i live thru you, but you can't live thru me" this one cross my mind everytime i read a work of you related with your friend and i don't know why, it's automatic, i guess it should mean something, try to analyze it, maybe you have the answer... one of the best human poem i've read ever
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