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Nowhere But Here

Nowhere but here,
In your arms
Close to you
Where our eyes can meet
And just simply wander and stare.
A thousand years can pass
And the kisses will last
Like an eternity
Nowhere else but here...

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  • love-is-forever
    March 14, 2007
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    Kudos

    Hey girl havt gotten on much.Love the poem!Keep it up!!!!


  • Tali28
    February 11, 2007

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    Sweet

    I love what you have so far.... sounds good. Haven't talked in awhile but do keep you in my thoughts. Take care and hope to talk to you soon.
    Much love Sis,
    Tali


  • Lady Eventide
    February 7, 2007

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    Good

    I like it so far. I think that you have a typo with the word "thousnd"...which has an "a." Other than that, this is quite moving. I can't wait for more.