Just add water
Throw in a splash of pain
Mix in a pinch of abandonment
Let stand for 18 years
Beat in happiness
Blend in a grain of doubt
Stir counter-clockwise 17 times
Place in freezer for 13 hours
Or until completely frozen
Thaw by means of microwave for 15 minutes
Sprinkle on a dash of hate
Season with anger
Bake for 24 hours at 450 degrees
Then just add water
And serve with a pinch of salt
Author notes
I really have no idea...Don't look at me I just wrote the damn thing!?!
Please tell me what you think
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verry diffrent
i kinda like in a way becaus its diffrent!!!
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I like the subtle undertones that could be picked up line by line, kind of made me find a little humor, but maybe I'm just burnt. Either way, this was fun to read.
Are you a cook?
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I spent the whole poem trying to figure out what this is supposed to mean and I'm quite disappointed that it doesn't have a point. But it's still an interesting write.
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Ok
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intersting yeah.... i accualy realy likes it for something that could have been realy corny.
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Unoriginal
Don't look at me I just wrote the damn thing!?! < You're asking me? And, you should know, what ever it is you don't. Because you did indeed write it.
Thaw by means of microwave for 15 minutes < Thaw using microwave for 15 minutes.
To be honest, I didn't like this at all. I can read the exact same poem a million other places. Very few, if any adjectives, I mean, adjectives are used as crutches alot, but not using any isn't good either. This was just angsty rambling. -
lol wow it's definitely interesting... original. I like it! <3
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I'm not sure what this is but it's still neat! -pawn-
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MMMMMMM.....
Aaaaa! Thats sound quite funny and dont know wheter sweet or sour,I definitly would like to eat this.HaHaHa I think this is cute little piece! And i really like it !!!
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Pretty sweet write, Kewl way of writing it. Interesting. *keep the darkness inside, but let your anger flow free*
~Oka
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nice write, i really enjoyed this piece and i think that it is the perfect recipe for someone like me.
this is a great poem and keep writing.
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Very interesting piece. Combining poetry and life is so common, but adding in a cookery lesson? Now that makes this poem stand out from everything I've read! Great piece, obviously a lot of emotion went into this.
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My father is into cooking...I guess it rubbed off on me in a weird way. Thank you all. ^_^
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nice write
why did you send it to me for though i apriecate it very much thanks for sharing and god bless SIGN: DI.
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I just sent it to different groups that i am in...not just to you. Thank for the comment though. ^_^
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interesting
I like it, it's a very intresting mix of pain. I love it. It's diffrent and very unique! -
wow
this is really good. i love it
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