We never had a chance in this
it seems our love is gone
who knew that we would never live
we've been doomed all along
i once had cherished our love
but now i miss it so
i didn't think we'd end this way
just wish you didn't go
in time i know i'll feel the pain
of being all alone
and in the chair i know i'll sit
i'll wait for you to phone
i know that it will never ring
-- aware it is no use
i know that even knowing that
i still will wait for you
i know i cannot bring you back
i never will succeed
there is no word in all the world
that would make you love me
and i'll look in the mirror
knowing that i am to blame
i never will forgive myself;
life will not be the same
your face is still etched in my head
i'm scared to let it go
cause if i let you slip away
i will be on my own
i don't know how to live without your tenderness and care
and even if i wish for you i know you won't appear
it seems like it's a nightmare
even though it's clearly real
and even though our love is sere
i cannot stop the way i feel
i wish that you could hear me
-- hear my crying late at night;
i wish that you would read this,
wish you'd see the things i write
i know i'm just a memory
a pigment in your head
to you we are not anything
all passion has been dead
but no matter how i wish it false
i know that it is true
it's dead; i must accept the fact
i never will have you
and somehow deep within my heart
i'll hold onto you still
i wish i could forget you
-- but i know i never will
A contest entry
- Dark Love by loveaswellashate.
393 points, ended February 20, 2007, 13 entries
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Comments
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Great poem. My favorite lines were-
but no matter how i wish it false
i know that it is true
it's dead; i must accept the fact
i never will have you
and somehow deep within my heart
i'll hold onto you still
i wish i could forget you
-- but i know i never will
I can definitely relate to that. Great Job!
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I Really like this.. a VERY good emotional write.. and i simply love it... thanx for enterin the contest and good luck...
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Loves...*hugs* -
it was a very good read, very touching and emotional... i sort of know what your going through cuz i am going through the same thing.. if you need to talk u can message me i'm here for you
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I really liked this poem and felt every emotion in it. Excellent work on it. one of my favorite stanza's was
"i once had cherished our love
but now i miss it so
i didn't think we'd end this way
just wish you didn't go"
Wow... I dont know why but this stanza really touched on me. There are lots of emotions portrayed. Excellent work and keep up the poetic edge!
Love
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