The white thing,
just float there in the sea
with white crystals inside it to make a big snow ball
wonderful
beatuiful
marvalous
is there more to say?
yes:
deep inside the white crystals there is a clear liquid,
a liquid we all drink,
and to pile all of that crytal goodness,
beatuifulness
coolness
we use this clear liquid to cool us of don't we?
The big snow ball moves along in the sea,
only one word to say:
lovely.
A contest entry
- Picture This II - Amaze Me by Cupcrazy.
400 points, ended February 7, 2007, 13 entries
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Comments
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hmmmmmmmmmmm, you know i think i know what you are talking about here but in a way i am not sure, lol, this is a great poem keep it flowing and good luck in the contest
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Thnak you for this entry, very nice piece and your thoughts are well conveyed.
Bunny
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