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The white thing

                          The white thing,
                    just float there in the sea
          with white crystals inside it to make a big snow ball 
                            wonderful
                              beatuiful
                            marvalous
                    is there more to say?
                          yes:
            deep inside the white crystals there is a clear liquid,
                              a liquid we all drink,
                          and to pile all of that crytal goodness,
                      beatuifulness
                      coolness
                  we use this clear liquid to cool us of don't we?
              The big snow ball moves along in the sea,
                      only one word to say:
                                lovely.   

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  • Disturbed Prodigy
    February 7, 2007

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    hmmmmmmmmmmm, you know i think i know what you are talking about here but in a way i am not sure, lol, this is a great poem keep it flowing and good luck in the contest


  • Cupcrazy gold member
    February 7, 2007
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    Thnak you for this entry, very nice piece and your thoughts are well conveyed. Bunny