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WithinYour Eyes






Within your touch I felt trust,

 in your kiss I felt passion,

and in your eyes, unconditional love










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  • Amunet Wolfbane Moderators member
    February 1, 2008

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    This is perfection in three lines. It is the perfection of love, lust, life and serenity all rolled into one. Fantastic!


  • Providence
    February 7, 2007

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    Mmmmmmmmmm. Three lines...three thoughts...yet much depth and passion.

    Truly wonderful Darling.

    good luck in the contest.

    Marianne

  • Junita
    February 7, 2007

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    I didn't know that it was going to be so short, but it's very powerful all the same! True love is a wonderful feeling. Great job!